Last week, I had a go at the more arty end of writing, the “in
a trance” school. This week, I thought I’d alienate the rest of you by
commenting on the other end of the scale, the “sausage factory” method.
The sausage method holds that writing is basically like
producing sausages on a machine, except with words instead of dubious pork. You
find your target market, you figure out what they like, and then you duplicate
that, at a fixed rate of words per day. Bingo, instant bestseller.
Or not...
The trouble with this is that it’s nonsense. First, you
will inevitably be writing derivative product. This may not matter to you if
you’re just in it for the money (in which case you’re a total fool. You’d probably
make much better money working in a shop).
Second, you probably won’t be writing a bestseller. You’ll
be writing the thing that people read when they’re tired of the person you’ve
ripped off. It will, at best, be second-best and a second choice, and will have to contend with a lot of similar books written for the same reason.
Third, even authors who have a limited range aren’t cynics
or hacks. A colleague once said of Lee Childs that “He writes the same book over and
over again, but he writes it really well”. Everything I’ve read and heard
suggests that Childs takes his work very seriously and is far from “phoning it
in”. That’s probably why, even if he does write the same book over and over again, he makes a good job of it.
Conviction
Which takes us onto a wider point. If you look at great “light”
novels, the sort of thing dismissed as “genre” or “entertainment”, there’s
always something deeper than the need to make a quick buck. You can’t read ‘Salem’s
Lot without feeling that Stephen King cares about the decline of small-town
America. Rogue Male by Geoffrey Household is full of observations about landscape
and social class, as well as being a fast-moving thriller. Tim Willocks’ Green River
Rising, a ferociously violent novel about a prison riot, has great sympathy for
its heroes, people thrown away by a rotten system.
Perhaps it’s a desire to go slightly beyond the boxes that
need to be ticked for the book to work. Perhaps it’s the inclusion of things
that the author does care about, and which he is going to make you, the reader,
care about even if you didn’t buy the book for that. It's a hard thing to define. The best word I can think to describe it is
conviction, and I don’t think a novel can be truly great without it.
Totally agree with this. The effort it takes to produce even mediocre fiction is extraordinary - the idea that you could do this on automatic belongs to people who have never really tried to do it!
ReplyDeleteI read Cleaver's book "Immediate Fiction" where he was talking about beating writer's block and he suggested that, if you were really stuck, just re-write someone else's story. By the time you're finished it won't be their's anymore. The story is transformed. Worked for Shakespeare.
Great blog Toby, keep the posts coming.
Cheers Keith! That's an interesting idea. Two writers probably couldn't write the same book at all.
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